Jul 20 2008
Mysterious Dreams…
The hidden meaning of dreams….
They often keep us up a night,
Making us wonder what they mean.
All alone, trapped in a dark damp room.
Continuous falling, and falling…
Wondering if we are going to end in doom.
Waking up in a cold sweat,
Out of breath,
And scared to death.
Images that look and feel so real
Those days, weeks, maybe months that go by
Because dreams keep us up at night
And our mind is at fright.
Dreams are thoughts beyond our imagination,
Somehow mixed in with the events of the day,
They are a part of life,
And could explain, the ways our lives will play
Forever one, they shall be the mystery
That lives on….
And one day, we may never know the real meaning of them…
Until we are gone.
Great job! Look forward to seeing what you put up next.
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Definitely, always proof read before posting a poem.
Always.
Because there are reasons to intentionally use alternate spellings, and often alternate uses of words themselves, so misspellings become all the more frustrating. It makes deriving the meaning from a poem that much more difficult.
“The hidden meaning of dreams….
They often keep us up a night,
Making us wonder what the mean.”
And I don’t think you hit the mark with this one. There are just too many trite images, and things that contradict each other or just don’t really illicit the sense you are trying to create.